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Open Poetry #48

Milky Way (haiku)

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2013-01-30 06:12 AM

Inspiration: Nasa picture posted by VAS
http://apod.nasa.gov/apod/ap120801.html
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Boundless sky meadow:

Eyes fill with immensity

souls long for freedom

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Light sources abound:

Hearts connect to Creation

seeds of love grow strong

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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2013-01-30 08:21 AM

Beautiful as always Margherita, Im enjoying these haiku's...HUGSS

~Victoria

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2013-01-30 09:30 AM

Ah, where darkness is the absence of love, certainly light is its presence.

You and Victoria weave syllables in perfect number for these haiku.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2013-01-30 12:22 PM

Like I've said before, Margherita, no one does the haiku as well as you do.
Ida

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2013-01-30 12:33 PM

A beauty!
Amazing view too.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2013-02-01 06:17 AM

Thank you, my dear Poet friends, for your most loving comments here. Only once in my life, on a beach around midnight, I have had a very clear view of the Milky Way and it will forever haunt me ... Such overwhelming beauty, no words will ever do justice to such a spectacle. But still we try of course!

Love,
Margherita

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