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That Won't Gild the Lily
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That Won't Gild the Lily |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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Oh, my fingertips touch your mound, There's magic there, I know it's true, I'm feverish from that I've found, You look and smile as if on cue. My fingertips upon your lips, Your sigh a wondrous thing to hear, And from your mouth pure nectar drips, With your eyes you beckon me near. I sit close for it is chilly, Perfume rich as strawberry crème, Why no, that won't gild the lily, A wondrous dream just as it seems. ©January 9, 2013 / Jerry at Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Yes sometimes those quiet mements in someones arms are the best. Enjoyed Jerry as always.  ~Victoria |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Victoria. I'm brave I guess by posting a non-challenge poem. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
You are lucky you inspire yourself...you don't need challenges. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I kinda feel out of place, it seems the Blue Room has been swamped with challenges. Whatever! No biggie. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Great piece, Jerry ... and as for challenges ... well, I'm in the same boat as you... I don't know nothing 'bout any o'dat! j. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
What boat? Your writing is getting better, my friend.  Hey! We don't need no stinking challenge! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. Maranatha! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, j., I appreciate your read and thoughts. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, JL, thank you my friend, and that was a goodie about "no stinking challenge," and of course I know where the original phrase came from. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Hey you guys are party poopers  except for J. Wesley haa..  ~Victoria |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lovely! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks...Jerry ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
 now why did I know you would be jealous ha!! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Cause you know guys, Victoria. I was really kidding, but thank's for the little "extra" you whooped on me . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (02-01-2013 06:33 AM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Not Virginia...its Victoria haa..no more kisses for you ha.. Okay I see you fixed it from last night. You're forgiven. [This message has been edited by Victoria (02-01-2013 08:31 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sorry, Victoria, I really am. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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