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Open Poetry #48

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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2013-01-28 08:11 AM

A cranbery mist
galloping across the sky
rodeo of stars.

The birth of a colt
from womb of the galaxy
a true miracle.

http://apod.nasa.gov/apod/ap121021.html
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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2013-01-28 08:47 AM

Exceptional, dear Victoria!

You are beautifully cosmo-inspired!

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-01-28 08:57 AM

Thank you dear one...these challenges takes me out of my comfort zone of romance.

Glad you enjoyed.HUGSS

~Victoria

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2013-01-28 11:26 AM

Ahhh, a lovely cranberry roan gallops across the heavens, or being a colt, perhaps he is frolicking. Out of your mist this youngster emerges. Well captured.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2013-01-28 11:41 AM

Thank you V...between you and RS I was really busy yesterday ha..but it was fun.
Hope you are feeling better I saw where you just had the flu.

~Victoria

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