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Open Poetry #48

Sarah Is A Smile

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2013-01-21 11:59 PM

Sarah You Are A Smile

Sarah why am I
so fascinated
by the radiance
of your smile
everytime I see it
it brings a smile to my face
perhaps reminding me
of the times a smile
was sans from your face
and my heart felt
some of that pain
that left you crying in the rain
and now every smile
that comes to your face
seems to be a soothing ointment to erase
the sadness from a face
that wasn't really you.

JamesLee
22January
2013

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (01-22-2013 12:00 AM).]

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2013-01-22 02:08 AM

Nice writing, James.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2013-01-22 11:06 AM

Enjoyed James,nothing like a beautiful smile.

~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2013-01-22 03:44 PM

A welcome metamorphosis! Lovely perception of true radiance.

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2013-03-12 10:50 PM

Thank you JL, Victoria and Margherita for the wonderful responses...James

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