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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

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0 posted 2013-01-20 04:05 PM

I wait for you upon the sands,
to float like driftwood back to me.
To feel your lips of heaven sent,
soft as moonlight upon the sea.
To warm my soul with touch of blush,
and undress needs with eyes of blue;
Whilst in arms of a midnight wind,
for this is all I ask of you.

'Tis your essence of musk I feed,
in the shadows of what is meant to be.
Upon dalliance of an orchid breeze,
'tis you in nakedness of night I see.
The blue lagoon within your eyes,
splashing over me like the tides.

[This message has been edited by Victoria (01-20-2013 04:42 PM).]

RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

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uk

1 posted 2013-01-20 05:10 PM

those gentle memories of comforting love, soothing thoughts.

RS

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-01-20 05:37 PM

Sensual in every respect, Victoria. The descriptive and sometimes almost wicked lines were a delight to read and to conjure images your words brought to mind. Very well done.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2013-01-20 06:57 PM

Thank you RS...So nice to hear from you and glad you enjoyed my words, and again it is nice to meet you.

Jerry...Thank you so much... I always like writing on the edge and I am always happy to hear from you too. Hope you have a nice night.

~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-01-20 08:41 PM

My, I'm glad you are always happy to hear from me "too." You'd think I had been away for quite some time. I'm just one of your old stand-byes . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Victoria

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5 posted 2013-01-20 09:39 PM

Well I only hear from you once a day ha!!

JerryPat2
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South Louisiana

6 posted 2013-01-20 10:11 PM

How many times a day do you prefer?

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Victoria

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7 posted 2013-01-21 07:55 AM

Are we talking about responses??

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2013-01-22 01:50 AM

Wow...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2013-01-22 08:38 AM

Thank you J. Nice to hear from you.

~V

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

10 posted 2013-01-22 06:33 PM

quote:
The blue lagoon within your eyes,
splashing over me like the tides.

That's so beautifully musical. Very lovely song of longing!

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Al Stone
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since 2013-01-22

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Florida, U.S.A.

11 posted 2013-01-22 06:43 PM

Sweet words

nice poem

Victoria

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Posts 5869

12 posted 2013-01-22 07:28 PM

Thank you so much for the nice compliment
Margherita and a what a beautiful name you have too.

Al..Welcome to pip...and it is nice to hear from you. Thank you for reading and commenting tonight.

~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

Michael

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since 1999-08-13

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13 posted 2013-01-23 12:46 PM

This was lovely, Victoria. Gave me a serious case of warm fuzzies.

Beautifully rendered..

Michael

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

14 posted 2013-01-23 01:55 PM

Thank you Michael...it must have been the orchid breeze...nice to hear from you as always.

~Victoria

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

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So. El Monte, California

15 posted 2013-01-24 05:52 AM

Lovely read, Victoria, Enjoyed.
Ida

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

16 posted 2013-01-24 08:16 AM

Good morning Ida. Thank you for peeking in and commenting...so glad you enjoyed.

~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

17 posted 2013-01-24 09:38 AM

Yes, Margherita is right - "a lovely song of longing". A pleasure to read, Victoria.

Helen

Victoria

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18 posted 2013-01-24 12:39 PM

Thank you so much Helen...I'm glad you enjoyed my words. Hope you have a great day.

~Victoria

Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs.
William Shakespeare

CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

19 posted 2013-01-26 02:37 AM

Felt the breeze upon my face...to cool the touch of blush...haha...

Another sensual read from your repertoire, Victoria.

CG

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

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20 posted 2013-01-26 09:44 AM

Thanks again CG...and for peeking in today,and reading my whisper words.

~Victoria

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

21 posted 2013-01-27 06:44 PM

I've seen those blue eyes once or twice in my lifetime and also was swept away.
Sheer beauty in your poem

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

22 posted 2013-01-27 07:28 PM

Thank you Emma...so glad you enjoyed and nice of you to peek in tonight...

~Victoria

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