Open Poetry #48 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
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If I possess a living soul Let it fill my life's frugal bowl: And mix elixirs' grand design, To give me peace before my time: Give me intellect to inspire, To always be one to admire, And if my breath will breathe for naught, 'Ere the cause of death; a love clot. ©January 13, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I shall remember this one, come 2-14-13! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"And if my breath will breathe for naught, 'Ere the cause of death; a love clot." What better way to go, eh? You sure are writing some good stuff! But then-again, you've had a lot of experiential practice. Yeah? Excellent, my friend!! JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
That'll work, Karilea. Thanks . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, JL, for your kind words. I've been thinking my poems have been kinda lackluster later, so thanks for the ego boost. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
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Everyone will remember you no matter what, thats for sure Jerry. ![]() ~Victoria Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Victoria, for the uplifting of your words . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
A grand cause to die of, for sure. This one maked me smile, Jer. Nicely done. Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Michael, it is the cause to die for. Thanks for being here . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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