Open Poetry #48 |
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Eternity Bleeds |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana ![]() |
Catch a grain of sand in your hand, Cast it t'ward the sky like a seed, Hear it when the grain does crash land, And 'ere you Eternity bleeds. ©December 29, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Good morning Jerry, nice to be reading your wise words again. Enjoyed. Reminds me of that poem about the little birdie in the sky flying high. ~Victoria |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Victoria for your kind words, I so every so much appreciate them. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Your writing is becoming more compact, but just as great as ever. You are making my brain-cells activate into contemplation. Excellent write, my friend!! JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Many thanks, JL, you really know how to turn it on, and I am grateful that you do. We who write thrive on the accolades of fellow poets, so your words are doubly rewarding. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks James...Jerry ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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