Open Poetry #48 |
lipstick afternoons |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you said the trees were prettier now how they lined up like video game people waiting their turn to be special when you touched them with your eyes and I was the sky pretending forest ranger herding whispers around your charms slowly slow motion so you could taste the residue of each flicker rubbing off on your lens the possibilities seemed endless with love like doors just opened into more doors or windows looked out onto other windows and the things you toyed with grew sensitive like every time we did something over again it was the first time we both recognized how it felt to have it spraying over our skin like the sunshine did those late afternoons when you held me out in front of your lipstick _____________ daark |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
You are definitely a master at herding whispers. ... video game people grin niiice |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Nicole...thanks lady...you can make them do anything I understand now if we can just find some that run on solar instead of batteries. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~~no matter what...nothing will ever top Pacman~~ ~enjoyed you darkly, daddy~*~*~
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms BBBel1e...yep, you got that right...thanks babe |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
many v. fine lines in this 'write' ... though, I am particularly fond of: "they lined up like video game people waiting their turn to be special" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks so much 2ndhand |
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