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Snake Charmer |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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we're wrapped in each others arms sans clothing discarded our peculiars I'm filled with testosterone she has lured as would a snake charmer robed our fires supply our individual *piaculars seeking to find its concluding flameout we clench, saliva kisses; they are our mettle my chest pressed into her soft woman's pride her tongue, searching, finding, teeth biting her mouth to my thoughts conveyed pleading to reach the destination as one concerning the all-consuming fires down below my quivering soul overflows with love from my Queens' devilishly kisses and nips I hover o'er the suspended brink of bliss her hands busy with reckless extravagance fluttering, seeking my soul and my heart's core enough! enough! I dissolve within myself head held high bellowing with *gasconade sounds from her brought on by new sensations and the collapsing corridors within her the night is ours, love is rambunctious ©February 10, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton *piaculars: sinful or wicked *gasconade: extravagant boasting ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (02-13-2012 10:08 AM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry I believe there is steam rising off of this one! Whew!  Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, you may very well be correct, Lori. Thanks for being here and commenting. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Good gracious, Jerry... whew Rambunctious, indeed. Who needs coffee in the morning, anymore? |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nicole, good to hear that you felt the poem and that it replaced java at least for the day. Heehee Thank you very much for reading and commenting. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
Somebody turn on the fan - quickly! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Thanks Marcia, for the read and the cool (with fan) comment. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Er, ah, . . . think I'll let the girls have "their" say.... j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, j., I understand . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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twistedpup Member
since 2011-02-25
Posts 115 |
delightful little poem. very hot and steamy. I enjoyed every line! well done! *hugs* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate the nice words for y poem, twistedpup. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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