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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
I wrote my name in the sky so you would remember me but the sky forgot my name I am not a memory I carved my name into a tree so you would remember me but that tree was lost to greed I am not a memory I wrote my name in the sand so you would remember me but the waves washed my name away I am not a memory I whispered my name into your ear so you would remember me but you did not want to hear my name I can not be a memory |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Reads like a prayer or remembrance card, but hypnotic in a gentle way.. Enjoyed the read,thank you for sharing Goldenrose. music was my refuge.i could crawl into the spaces between the notes and curl my back to loneliness - Maya Angelou |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed this. jo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very sad. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is lovely. Who doesn't hope to be remembered by someone who was special to us? But don't we all deserve to be more than a simple memory? Best to you. Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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