Open Poetry #48 |
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Lady Sunday (For Bluesy and those who remember) |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa ![]() |
Lady Sunday walked into Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, and there paused for just a spell to consider all her options. Suddenly the wind rose up and pushed her forwards/on and then despite many thoughts she found herself in Saturday situated, yes, of course, on the edge of remembrances. And then as would be the sea rose fulsome/free but the shore unfriendly as before forced her to land again back into herself. Sunday is a day of thought and dreams not meant to be but, oh, she loved them way back when she stepped most gingerly into knowing more. She still knows more and yet she hides behind tumultuous storms that always without fail blanket all that went before, cause the rain to fall, and hasten her departure into that dreaded Monday. Now Monday shadows all her days like truth known but never seen to make of life’s ordained cycles a plain and simple mockery. And the one who thrives on mockery grows bigger, grander, more imposing in his cave not made by man until one day most hopefully the exit point too small for evil to re-enter life’s ordained cycles. Life’s cycles; yes, indeed they’re meant to make us see no one should forever be a Lady Sunday just like me! ![]() Helen / 29 December 2012 |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Wow... love your poetry! Smiles, Ms. E |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks, Ms E. Happy New Year! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Aww Honey~ This made me cry, mostly because I feel the saddness in your heart, and because, like you, it reminds me of better days. Your poetry is brutally honest and sincere. ...I wish I could find the right words to say to you, Helen dear. Just know you and your poetry always move me in the most gentle way. I hope you will continue to grace us with your love for the written word, and that you will find peace in the New Year. God Bless your heart, Lady Sunday. Big ol' bear hugs!!! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you, dear Bluesy gal! I may be sad but life ain't all bad, you know. It's just that every time you call me Lady Sunday I can't help but remember the start of it all. I have no true definition of "all" but whatever it was it turned my life upside down and I haven't yet managed to be right way up again all the time. Hugs are always nice even if virtual ones so thank you very much. I guess the written word was and still is my outlet for feelings which don't seem to come around as often these days as they once did. I suppose that could perhaps be called "peace". Anyway, here's to 2013! It's not likely to make all our dreams come true but we sure can hope for some of them. Love Helen |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
As one who remembers I love this, Helen. Ida |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed reading Helen, the first time I have read it. Mondays are always sort of blah arent they, for some reason. Dreams are nice even though not meant to be most of the time...Happy New Year to you. ~Victoria Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks Ida and Victoria. I think dreams always come true but I just don't know in which lifetime. |
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