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Threshold Song
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Threshold Song |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I hear his call Beckon call, beacon call I close my eyes, wait For the sign, meditate, calm Inward, look He dances around me Hears me Finds me I look within, find His notes move Stir me awake Awake He calls Beckon call, beacon call We see We are on the threshold. --------------------------------- E.M.L. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely and captivating, dear Ebonygirl. You are beautifully inspired. Margherita  |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank You , Margherita, Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Wonderfully thought out and exquisitely written, Ms E. "Threshold Song" is a stunning beauty. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you Jerry, the poem was inspired by the music of Collective Awakening. As they played their music I felt an overwhelming sense of One Love; the Love that will find me. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I had the sense you were writing about a spiritual or future One, Ms E., but didn't say it because I hate to be wrong on these things, so I hold back and substitute other generic comments. Thank you for confirming my thoughts were on track. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
You're good JP. Smiles, ms. e |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I would like to add Jerry, the couple, who are the musicians in Collective Awakening, are on u-tube. Seeing the love transpire between them as they played was palatable. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
It is amazing how thoroughly music can move people; it is emotions in sounds, and exceptional musicians can weave them through their listeners, pulling their own emotions into the music. Love this. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Yes, Nicole, it is amazing! Music touches, enters in areas within and resonates profound emotions. Smiles, ms. e |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"He calls Beckon call, beacon call We see We are on the threshold." With such deep emotion. This is pure love from your heart. Very inspirational. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. Maranatha! [This message has been edited by JL (02-14-2012 01:52 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ebony, the Play on Words is wonderful and insightful. Brief, and when you allow, brevity making very wide, sweeping commentary in silence... well done, m'friend. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Great timing on this one, Edna. Perfect for Valentine's Day. Ida |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Yes, EG, you are on the threshold of something..I like this so far, but the poem begs me to ask for more...what happens next, after you cross? There are many meanings to the word "threshold" please let me hear another song....:-) |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you JL, Sunshine and Ida, I appreciate your comments! Ice, more songs to come, Thank you! Ms. E |
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