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12/21/12 - End Of Dazed
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12/21/12 - End Of Dazed |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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 Tonight, is the hindmost dead of night The final, pitch of dark No more twinkle little stars No more flashing sparks No more caca Doodle doo No more, break of dawn No more break of fast and fury No more eggs, and hawm The stars are all in line once more To give their Last, goodbye Fate can kiss our sorry, ass Our echo will, not die What is end without beginning What are lies of truth What can answers really mean If life can steal our youth When were questions that we bled Upon the skin of earth Ever going to be explained Before this backward birth The wheel of fortune’s ticking down Onto it’s final, spin The penalty for being us Is that we’ve never, been And even if We all, survive To live another, day We will learn that all along That we, were just the prey The stars worked hard to make a voice To somehow set them free To speak for all that ever was And all there will, to be Maybe, if we all reach in And stop this wheel, of sinning We will learn that this was just The end of our, beginning |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I don't understand the "end of our daze" and how it came to be that we believed in some small way that it was so. However your poem was interesting, mankind is not without flaws and crazed human beings, but there is still a lot of good in this world. I think all the wonderful poets at pip are proof of that. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hi Lori thanks so much for great review. A lot of folks have been a little dazed about this mayan calendar 12/21/2012 end of days today, so that is why I named the piece what I did. In the beginning im just kind of pointing out some things we would obviously miss if it hypothetically was to end today, and then Im just basically rambling on about lifes questions etc. In the end my point is that the harder we try to better ourselves that this day like any day can start to be the end of the beginning of that and the start of a better way for all our days to come.  |
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mellowdown Junior Member
since 2012-12-19
Posts 30usa |
it seems mankind is convicted by non chalance of self promise, would that we all cared more for one another, thankfully our ultimate fate holds true promise beyond one day, enjoyed the read, a poem is a sigh |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
and i enjoy it when you take the time to share your thoughts on my mere scribbles.. thank you again Mellow.. |
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