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Open Poetry #48
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
0 posted 2012-12-15 10:27 AM

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At eleven
O’clock high

How odd
That bright star . . .
Following
A silver moon

Like love
That will not
Go away

No matter
How I try


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Victoria
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1 posted 2012-12-15 06:12 PM

I enjoyed your lovely thoughts. True love never vanishes from the mind completely.
~Victoria~

Life is a great big canvas-Throw all the paint on it you can.
  -- Danny Kaye
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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2 posted 2012-12-26 08:11 PM

Very nice...James
Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
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3 posted 2012-12-26 09:29 PM

..exquisite twist, at end..much enjoyed

..spiros

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Marchmadness
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4 posted 2012-12-29 04:48 PM

Excellent expression of love, John. Not too much, just enough.
                             Ida
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