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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you would hold out your hands with secrets like dirty was in one and good was in the other then you put them behind your back with mischief and wore that don't look at my eyes dress the almost nothing on everywhere one, see thru with the sun behind you too, grinning at my eyes you asked me to pick and guess what you held there then you would push my selection behind your hem and make me go look for it playfully on purpose and it was always good and dirty with either hand ____________ daark |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
It is so much better when there is someone to share the playground with you. As long as you don't hog the slide, 'cause that would just be mean.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Nicole and don't eat the tootsie rolls you find in the sand box. Thanks ms lish |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Love the playfulness in this ... and I wonder if "dirty" is even an option ... the word is well mixed with "good" when it is part of the lovers' vocabulary. Me thinks .You say it with your usual poetic charm. Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Mar....my fondest memories are of the playful times of lovers. Thanks ms |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"and it was always good and dirty with either hand" What's a boy to do when faced with this kind of dilemma, but go for the dirty that's good? Fine work as always. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thank you iceman.. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Ah! A case of not letting the right hand know what the other one is doing? "...and wore that don't look at my eyes dress." I love that line. It leaves all kinds of innuendo to explore. I don't think the lady wants you to read her mind. No doubt you are very good at the shell game.  ~Klassy |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms KL...thanks lady friend.. |
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