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Open Poetry #48
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Ethern
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since 2010-07-01
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on a plane
0 posted 2012-11-23 02:58 AM


Sheepish Souls assemble solemnly beneath the Steeple

to hear Pastor in the Pulpit preaching "plagues upon the People".

Messiah misses morning Mass, measuring the Times

while the Devil dodges details, drafting damnable designs.
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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-11-23 05:41 AM

Heh.Heh. Ain't dat da way it goes, Ethern?

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Ethern
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2 posted 2012-11-23 05:47 AM

most unfortunately.
Michael
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3 posted 2012-11-25 10:40 AM

Ah, a fine lesson in alliteration for us all.  I'm glad you used quotation marks in your  
quote:
to hear Pastor in the Pulpit preaching "plagues upon the People".
stanza.  I so read that the wrong way the first time through.  Nicely done.

Michael
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