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Rock Solid (Double Acrostic)
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Rock Solid (Double Acrostic) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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Rack up those balls and let us heaR Oboe notes filtered from the gazebO Checkered tablecloth oh so pathetiC Knee-jerk response from fuming cooK Soda has been spilled upon my dresS Order that plate cooked with bamboO Light here makes things very dismaL I would advise you get the calamarI Do you think so? I prefer the squiD ©Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Way cool! first time I ever saw a double one. I could almost hear and smell the place. Very good! You never cease to amaze... lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah, I forgot and posted this morning. So used to doing it I forgot I wasn't. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Good job Jerry, fun to read. Its always nice to write a different form once in a while. Enjoyed. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, I do tend to experiment from time to time, Victoria. Thank you for being here with me today. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Ethern Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 150on a plane |
very clever. well done. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Much obliged, Ethern, writing it almost drove me batty. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Show off!! Heeeheeee... Excellent write(s), bud!! JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! I guess I was showing off some. Thank you, JL. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wow very clever penned love it!  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you very much, Charisma, I appreciate it. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Ethern Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 150on a plane |
now do one that makes a full sentence that begins with the first letter of the first line and ends with the last letter of the first line. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You do it. I don't take requests. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Ethern Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 150on a plane |
ok j-pat. i'll give it a go. but not today, i'm exhausted. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed it--I always like to see something this creative. It makes me smile. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I wasn't expecting you to "give it a go," Ethern, that is your call. I merely did what I did and posted it. It's not a race or anything. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nice to see that you enjoyed the poem, Nan. Thank you . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
hmmmm trying to picture you in a dress..... lol...nice write my friend |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
It was supposed to be "Soda has been spilled upon her dresS" Call it a Freudian slip if you care to, luminosity. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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