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Open Poetry #48

A Woman the Made Me

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-11-17 07:29 PM

A Woman that Made Me

In a heartbeat
I would go
as far as I could
if I could meet
a woman like her again,
a woman that made me feel comfortable
with the man that I am.

JamesLee
14November
2012

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2012-11-17 07:45 PM

She sounds like a keeper James. Enjoyed

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-11-17 08:20 PM

Keep looking.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2012-11-19 07:38 PM

Nice thoughts and writing!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2012-11-24 08:11 PM

Thanks Victoria, Jerry and JL for reading and responding...James

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