Open Poetry #48 |
Whisper Wonder |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
WHISPER WONDER 11 November 2012 It was a flutter-moment, as flower-fleeting as sunlight on a young leaf frolicking in Summer’s breath, but barefoot-imprinted on the memory like wandering deep into the dank forest of a favourite painting in a long-gone childhood better and worse than it was. Owl |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh! What a moment- you brought it to me fresh and new and I like it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Nan. Owl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, James. Owl |
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Ethern Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 150on a plane |
where's the like button? |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Giggles! You've just pressed it. Owl |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I'd love to 'wander' into that painting and never return! ... as always, a most fine 'penning' ! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Cool, my friend...sounds like someplace I'd like to take my camera... j. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Loved your painting of words as always. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Bruce. Smiles - we’d miss you. Thank you, Jimmy. Having seen your photos in Pip, I think you could take your camera pretty much anywhere and create magnificent photos of anything at all! Thank you, Victoria, for your lovely words. Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What a magical poem, Diana. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Ida, for your very kind words. I am glad you enjoyed it so much. Owl |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
this is enchanting to read |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Emma Rose. Owl |
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