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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Her love for him was authentic as her Waterford crystal vase shattered into a dozen blue forget- me- nots strangled by the drought of his kiss while he made love to a younger woman so everytime she walks by that diamond cut long stem bud vase she thinks of him and she smiles as she remembers her question to him "Do you think she will look as good as me when she is my age?" "Probably Not" He said. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, a question and an answer. But in his case I'm sure he wasn't planning on hanging around her that long. There seems to always be another one, with more blond hair and younger. WoW! I am very happy you finally showed your face. Adorable, bright and cheery smile and as pretty, Victoria, as a picture. (Which it is. Heh.Heh) ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you for the compliments Jerry. It was a fun write.I never know where im going until I get there. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
A barb well placed, my friend, though mine would probably have pierced much deeper. Loved the simpleness of the barb, thou...sorta like the third finger salute!! Good Job!!! jimmy |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Third finger salute ha. I like that one. Jimmy. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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Ethern Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 150on a plane |
bravo |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Bravo to you too Ethern. Thanks for peeking in. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you James for stopping by. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
some philosophy of love, enjoyed the grace of words and subtlety of the message, superb, yann |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
the lack of malice for the situation really punctuates this write nicely...enjoyed |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Yann and Luminosity for peeking in today and leaving your kind words. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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