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Open Poetry #48

Tarzan Down

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-10-23 10:03 PM

Tarzan Down

Tarzan lost Jane
and the pain
hit him
like a hard rain
and the apes
and the lions
and the tigers
consoled him
and in his heart
he swam in
the river of depart
and within his mind
he swung from the vines
of hard times.
After a full season of regret
he remembered many things about Jane
he couldn't forget
and then word came from far away
upon the seventh year
and on the seventh day
the drums were beating,
what did the drums say...
the mesage was Jane would be
returning to Tarzan on New Years day.
Upon hearing this message
his heart leaped for joy
and he couldn't wait to
share the good news with his son boy.

JamesLee
22October
2012

Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

1 posted 2012-10-24 01:15 AM

Simple to the point I like it.

cheers
vic

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-10-24 08:01 AM

And a movie legend was in the making. Where's Cheetah?

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2012-10-27 12:26 PM

Thank you inspired and Jerry for reading and responding...James

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2012-11-05 08:16 PM

enjoyed this, sure have missed all of you here. glad to be back

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2012-11-06 02:18 AM

lovely metaphor indeed, this is so nice,

yann

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2012-11-06 03:56 AM

interesting to say the least...

j.

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