Infinite Stardust dreams (rewritten)

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Open Poetry #48

Infinite Stardust dreams (rewritten)

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2012-10-15 02:54 PM

   Infinite Stardust dreams

Perhaps sunsets and Autumn
serve to deepen our sorrows
and yet purify the soul,
on such cool-bright moonlit
   nights …
following Summer’s footsteps
   into Fall,
where a billion mystic stars
(linked by these 'endless'
   mountains
to the pathless, untamed sea)
are painted across this
crystalline cosmic canvas
in infinite stardust-dreams
   and memories
of lives and loves gone by.

            --- b. e. adams (10/14/2012)

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-10-15 03:07 PM

Written dramatically, purposefully, and of course descriptive as is your claim to fame in my opinion. I, though, do not look at sunsets and Autumn with sorrow. I look at, and think of both sunset and Autumn as merely beauty, one being the end of another day in your life and the other a link between the heat of summer to the cold of winter. I enjoy them both.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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