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Open Poetry #48

Of Her Sweet Love

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-10-13 06:14 PM

Of Her Sweet Love

Her skin
like silk fabric
poking me
in the eye,
her kisses
like colorfull parachutes
dropping from the sky,
her presence
a blessing of essence,
every woman I ever
wanted to know,
singing and dancing naked
in a tangerine grove
putting on a tantalizing show,
I can see her
when my eyes are closed,
I can taste her
even when my tongue is dry,
I smell her fragrance
in the comfort of my dreams
because she is precious,
a one of a kind woman,
she is the woman
fitting me like a silky glove
taking me into the arms
of her sweet love.

JamesLee
10October
2012

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-10-13 06:34 PM

Sounds great! Description fantastic . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2012-10-13 10:47 PM

"I smell her fragrance
in the comfort of my dreams
because she is precious"

Wow, love this very descriptive
imagery in your dreams, a true
depiction "Of Her Sweet Love"

Very nice write, James.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2012-10-14 12:35 PM

Wonderful to read you again James...I've been away from these pages blue for too long... I see you are still making your words dance for all the world to see! Just lovely...
Hugs RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2012-10-14 04:56 PM

Very nice, every word a drop of love.

Margherita

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

5 posted 2012-10-14 09:08 PM

..very great, James..from the heart--the best..

..spiros
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