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That Day on Bayou Lafourche
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That Day on Bayou Lafourche |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 Uploaded with ImageShack.us the day was sunny and bright I was sitting on the bank of Bayou Lafourche all was good fine and dandy life couldn't be better life had never been better then the shadows begin to appear clinching the limbs of trees which stretched out over the water I could still see the suns reflection on the bayou made me think of heavenly choirs as it shone on top of lethargic water ducks were congregating where people threw food to them and began to squawk loudly then quickly took to the air one lone she-dog a mangy cur threw her nose in the air and howled piteously and, as she began to run toward me the darkness like black road tar engulfed us raising the hackles on the cur I felt something akin to an out-of-body experience it left me with thoughts strange, uncomprehending, meandering thoughts this took place six weeks ago the mangy cur my one and only friend looks at me growls deeply, quietly, within herself a growl of consternation ©September 17, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
LOL! Thanks for the laugh. Kat >^..^< |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You're more than welcome, Kat, and thank you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Now that IS one mangy mutt. What a story, Jerry! Enjoyed the read. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha! Yeah you're right, JL, . . . er . . . which one you calling a mangy mutt? HehHeh ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The humor is great...the photo-cropping...excellent! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh.Heh. Thanks, Karilea. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Boy, if THAT doesn't scream H A L L O W E E N ... nothing does!!! Good one. j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Haha!! Yep, I've been kinda in the mood for the last few days. Need to stop and pick it up later I think. Appreciate it, J. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
hahaha doggone that was a good tail.. definately two paws up for sure lol what a hoot Jerry.. the picture especially haha great stuff! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, Richy, for the two paws up . . . Arf-Arf! ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
hahah good one.. id stick around but now i have to.. flea |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh, boo . . . hiss . . . Richy . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I so enjoy catching up on the other comments....Good one, Richy! |
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