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Quivering Echoes
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Quivering Echoes |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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QUIVERING ECHOES 8 October 2012 There was a voice full of the cries of seabirds and lilting laughter like Christmas lights and song as sweet and high as larks fly and a touch on the teasing wind in rushes of to and fro and she closed her eyes, breathless. Owl |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Just lovely, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
ohhh this was spot on Diana.. and that title was worth the price of admission alone! so wonderfully done you are just pumping out little gems like so many pebbles in the stream.. how lucky for us!  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Like the special touch you infused within the borders of this poem, Owl. Such a light, graceful touch you have. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, Kat. Besides your replies, I also always enjoy your kitty-cat signature. Thank you, Richy. Your warm, kind words make me feel like a real poet and that feels good! Love the pebbles in the stream! Thank you, Jerry, for your very kind words. Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What a delight this is, Diana. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Ida. I am delighted you found it a delight, lol! Owl |
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