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Farewells |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Farewells Through the Autumn morning mist spectral hills seem to dance the wind, with the trees that sweep a grey and cloud-thatched sky. Here, falling leaves and memories are a rain of silence near the silver stream winding forever on its lonely path through this vexing world and far away like your heart. I know not where nor why. --- b. e. adams (10/7/2012) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Forlorn and very sad poetry, Bruce, but written superbly. That isn't surprising. There's nothing quite like a broken heart to reach out and touch you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nicely done! Jerry said it best, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very sad, Bruce and yet you are blessed to be able to turn sadness into such beautiful poetry. Ida |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I agree with Jerry ... well done, my friend. j. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Your words write of a place that fits perfectly with a place I visited a week ago. We are beyond fall and into the early dawning of winter here - and you described what I saw that day. Good job, Bruce. Sad, chilly and well written. A |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you all ! ... wish this hadn't been my "reality write" though ! |
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