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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2012-10-06 09:16 PM

       Nothing More to Say

Even these Autumn hills
are made of empty spaces now,
missing the very sound of you.
Falling leaves and broken promises
are dying quietly to the distant
strains of Winter's tune in this
  misty-cold sunset,
for you have left me
with nothing more to say
in total ruin ... and decay.

         --- b. e. adams (10/6/2012)

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-10-06 09:19 PM

Climb out of it.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lady Goodman
Member

since 2012-10-04

Posts 193

2 posted 2012-10-06 09:32 PM

I used to think about her every day, then it got to where I only thought about her when I was here, so trust I understand.

*hugs*

Be well.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2012-10-08 12:50 PM

Some days are harder than others. Some days are so gray and chilly that they invite thoughts of lonliness.

A

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

4 posted 2012-10-08 01:21 AM

from the ruins and decay
from the ashes as you say
you will once again rise
like a ray of sunlight
to rise again, now,
my friend, is your fight
still, rise again, my friend
be filled with Light

Ms. E

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2012-10-08 01:32 AM

poignant, bruce, sometimes we can't forget and move forward, great poem

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

6 posted 2012-10-08 09:20 AM

Many thanks to all you fine folks that commented on this 'write' ...

guess I've always lived in a "Romantic Fantasy" world and don't
really understand the need for all the 'relationship cruelty' of "reality"

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2012-10-08 11:24 AM

The heart is a fragile thing and capable of so much joy and pain...given time, it is also resilient...and there's the rub!

hugs to you dreampoet~

r v wooo
Senior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 656

8 posted 2012-10-08 12:16 PM

Hmmm, "shdp", one's perception is one's reality. Interesting poem...want to share some of my perceptions with you.

All dies! and not alone...
Matter is neither created or destroyed...it just changes forms.
Decay is one of Nature's change agents...
and you are not alone in your experience, so, keep on truckin'.
The world around us is a beautiful place.

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