Open Poetry #48 |
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Destination Unknown |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
The Earth grew silent as the slim Palm Trees swayed in the breeze, by the tossed sea's wheeze phased, out of date and dazed the ship slipped silently unfit and unnoticed as passer-byes amazed |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"the ship slipped silently unfit and unnoticed" For some reason this line makes me think of the book I am reading about the Hungarian Revolution back in the fifties, among other things. The words just fit the student unrest during that era. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hey good to read you martini man~ Liked your analogy here, as the sea is my muse, and it's not always smooth sailing. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Not sure I understood this ... but enjoyed the read anyway... j. |
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