Open Poetry #48 |
Love Birds (for Lori) |
katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
LOVE BIRDS Perched up high upon a branch In the air he feels romance Patiently he sits and wait To concede to natures fate Then he sees her flirt on by He flashes bright wings to catch her eye He then begins to sing and dance To tweet and twitter, to preen and prance She's intrigued by all the flutter Spell bound, she sees no other Soon she joins in his love song Now only to him does she belong He makes their bed with bits of twine, Moss and twigs all entwined In hopes she sees he's done his best To give to her a true love nest Beak to beak they coo together Two love birds in nest of feather Soon hatchlings begin to peep Baby birds they sing to sleep So it goes, it's natures way And it's still true today Two birds in love together Mated now and forever |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Oh I love it! That is so special! Thank you very much. I can't wait to show it to Dennis. You are such a sweetheart! Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I see that Lori is deeply touched by this tribute, as she well should be. Wonderful expression of love, Kat. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Thanks Lori, so glad you like it! You inspired me when you asked about the birds and bees. Thanks JP, your comments are always greatly appreciated! Karen >^..^< |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Simply delightful! *S* |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
When I was twelve the neighbors had two caged "love birds." I'm blind so can't describe them . I would sit, intranced, by their cage listening to them twittering and feeling them putter about. I somenhow imagined then could communicate with me, or me with them, if I were just quiet and still. I thought that had something to tell me. I thought that if I sat with them long enough, close enough, quietlytly gently, they could tell me the secret of life. I would fantasize about being a bird. But instead, the "real world" intruded, poluted, corrupted, and by the time I was thirteen, like all teenagers, I HATED everything ... Mother ... EVERYTHING. Singing Karen O, I just remember that cats eat birds |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
I love it...well done...I can see why Lori loves it...the vision is wonderful...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
i just love watching the birds carry on around the trees surounding my house or at the lake nearby.. sad when one of my cats, brings one home though i had to smack one free from the maw of death the other day so glad he flew off to live another day this was very sweet my friend |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Thanks Richy, glad you're back my friend! Karen >^..^< |
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