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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2012-10-02 12:18 PM

Your voice

stays back in the shadows

of a cold wintry night.

Your mind

out of yesterday,

knowing it is time for a change.

While gone

is the spell

that crossed the span of time

Closing dreams of tomorrow

that echoed what might have been...

when love comes under a harvest moon.
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M (inspired by combining your titled thoughts)

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-10-02 12:48 PM

Hah! Sounds very familiar to what happened to me just recently, Maureen. You more or less told it like it was too. I know it isn't meant to be from my titled thoughts, but the result feels the same.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

2 posted 2012-10-02 01:04 PM

But Jerry, it is from some of your titles and those of others in poetry #48. Sometimes when we can't think of anything to write, some of us in the past take some of the titles and make them into a poem and I am sure several were from your titles.

So I must thank you and the others that I borrowed from. I am not having very much happening in my life right now so this inspired me today.

M

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2012-10-02 01:07 PM

Thank you, Maureen. I had thought you had one particular title in mind. And if one or more of my titles helped you compose this fine poem, I am proud of that. That's a neat way to write poetry.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

4 posted 2012-10-02 01:46 PM

you are welcome Jerry...and I went back a few days of poetry 48 to pick the titles I thought would make good lines. Took a while plus I am making some changes in my life as the need arises. Sometimes change is necessary to survive

M

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

5 posted 2012-10-02 06:27 PM

You do this so well, such great inspiration.

Your poetry always makes for good reading. x/o

Margherita
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Eternity

6 posted 2012-10-02 06:40 PM

Very nice poetic "patchwork", dear Maureen. You are so creative.

Love,
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

7 posted 2012-10-02 07:18 PM

well done indeed !

you are en'titled' to a major bow on this one !!

jwesley
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8 posted 2012-10-02 08:43 PM

However you choose your words, my friend, I never cease to enjoy them...

j.

JL
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9 posted 2012-10-02 11:13 PM

You make it seem so easy.
So very creative!!
Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Marchmadness
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10 posted 2012-10-03 01:30 PM

Very clever, Maureen. Enjoyed.
Ida

katahdin
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11 posted 2012-10-04 12:49 PM

Nicely done! enjoyed.
Kat >^..^<

Alison

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12 posted 2012-10-05 10:17 PM

I agree with everyone else. Nicely done, Ms. M.

A

suthern

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13 posted 2012-10-11 04:16 PM

I love these when they're well done... and this is superb! *S*

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

14 posted 2012-10-12 07:48 AM

Thanks everyone. I appreciate your comments.

M

Michael

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15 posted 2012-10-12 09:46 PM

... and combined very well. It's amazing how the mind is cappable of piecing together ssuch a sound message out of a barrage of titles. Nicely done.

Michael

latearrival
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16 posted 2012-10-13 03:25 AM

You really do combine the titles well.Not too easy a write to do. Enjoyed. jo

Victoria

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17 posted 2012-10-29 04:50 PM

Enjoyed reading your words again Maureen.
Very lovely as always.

"If music be the food of love, play on." (William Shakespeare)

r v wooo
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18 posted 2012-10-30 02:15 PM

Interesting...the poem has me ready for the next chapter or the sequel. RV

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