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Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2012-10-01 10:14 PM

The Wish

Warm autumn breezes caress my face
As I watch the sun set in the west
Light clouds drift across the sky like lace
Painted pink show nature at its best

Silence descends with evening’s twilight
While the full moon raises in the east
First star brings to mind star light star bright
Evening’s romance as magic’s released

Drifting into velvet embraced dream
Meeting a shadow under the moon
Holding hands they walk along the stream
Sharing the lonely sound of a loon

As night deepens they walk in silence
Not needing words to express feelings
Each is using their soul for guidance
Letting true love do timeless healing

Walking to the well in the meadow
They share an ancient magical wish
Seen from the trees by a star sent doe
Who will place before the stars the wish

Karen Mc Neil
October 1, 2012

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2012-10-01 11:31 PM

Reads like a story book tale
from the Sherwood Forest in Nottinghamshire...
Enjoyed the read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2012-10-02 01:03 AM

while reading i felt the autumn breeze
and saw the beautiful colored sky
beautifully penned

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2012-10-02 07:05 AM

Wonderful imagery, Karen, and a wish to be granted is the way I see it. This is such a lovely piece of writing.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2012-10-02 11:07 AM

Karen, this is such a peaceful read. Enjoyed it this morning.

M

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2012-10-07 03:23 PM

imagery and 'Romanticism' most fine indeed !!

That 'true Love' is a grand concept; but, for
some of us, magnificently elusive ...

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

6 posted 2012-10-07 07:10 PM

Nice!
Kat >^..^<

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2012-10-07 09:30 PM

Thoroughly enjoyed this my friend...

j.

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