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On Hiatus |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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On the wisp of a whim like my hair in the wind my thoughts flutter like dove feathers to pleasing places and long lost faces memories freed of sting by time’s tempering I’m not near so awful as I once would tell myself I was Now that my because has gone for lack of reason leaving me to this peaceful season in acceptance and understanding on hiatus from critical and demanding LGR©9/18/12 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Happy to hear that the dark has found some light, Lori, good for you. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry, a few good days in a row like this and I'll find a way to screw it up so it feels "normal" again. People are such funny creatures. Lori  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"On hiatus from critical demanding" That statement leaves me quite envious of you. A moment's pause to just sit back and reflect. That can be a bewildering place even so, when your whole focus and reason for doing anything and sometimes everything is thrown out the window. For me, it sounds like a nice place to catch your breath... but my because may differ from yours. I wouldn't miss mine if it never came back. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Yes we all need a break sometimes. Nicely done. Kat >^..^< |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Michael- unfortunately it is only hiatus and they are rare. I think that is what prompted me to write about it. Kind of like an eclipse. Thanks for commenting Lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Kat- yes we do. The tricky part is figuring out what kind of break you really need- well that's my problem...A nap isn't necessarily the universal break to take... Thanks for the read and comment Lori |
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