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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-09-15 06:27 AM

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It isn't even dark.
Already the stars twinkle in the Heavens,
Far above the cityscape.
They know things we're unprepared to accept.

©August 25, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2012-09-15 06:38 AM

Hey Jerry: almost a "Twenty Or Less..." here...

I especially like your ending line: "They know things we're unprepared to accept." A pensive feel... Enjoyed.

-MVS

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-09-15 07:07 AM

Appreciate your thoughts, Mark. Mankind have wondered about those stars, and now we have walked on the moon and sent robots to Mars

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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3 posted 2012-09-15 03:46 PM

Last line is brilliant. I love contemplating the cosmos and that is right where you took me. Thank you!

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-09-15 04:15 PM

Thank you, Lori. Glad I could take you somewhere this weekend. Heh.Heh.

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Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2012-09-15 04:30 PM

One of the reasons I like to live in small towns is that I can see so many stars...your words capture the magic and the beauty...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-09-15 04:32 PM

Appreciate the nice thoughts, Karen.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2012-09-25 10:22 PM

Fine writing...James

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2012-09-25 11:18 PM

Yes, they do seem to know.
Enjoyed, my friend, enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2012-09-26 07:13 AM

Thank you James and JL, appreciate the comments.

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