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Open Poetry #48

A Delicious Slice

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-09-10 01:26 AM

A Delicious Slice

Its hard to say goodbye
to a woman that you love,
a woman that fit so nicely
into your dreams like a
pair of fine fitting gloves.

This is a part of love,
this is the nature of life,
relationships don't last forever
sometimes love is only
a delicious slice.

JamesLee
10September
2012

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-09-10 06:44 AM

I like this.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2012-09-10 07:34 AM

Sigh, yes, dear James, you got that right. Well done.

Margherita

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2012-09-12 08:55 AM

... that leaves you hungry for more. *S*

Well written!!! *S*

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2012-09-19 11:54 PM

Thank you Jerry, Margherita and suthern for the nice responses...James

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2012-09-25 01:22 AM

so lovely, and splendid image, love is just a slice,

thanks so much james,

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2012-09-25 10:11 PM

Thank you 2islander2 for the nice response...James

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