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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Looking When I look at you I can clearly see your beauty but I'm still looking for the softness of your heart. JamesLee 02September 2012 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love it!! Short and sweet and to the point. Well said, James~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Blues said it! And I agree!! j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sometimes that is the hardest to find. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There is that sidereal kind of beauty, which makes the access to the heart difficult. This is very good, James! Margherita |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent write! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
James... True love is blind. Or so I've been told. Maybe it's time to ask? I knew a girl once that said to me: "You are cute, in the dark." I should have asked her about that...  Excellent writing, James. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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