Open Poetry #48 |
in association with whispers |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you have that vase of glances within your eyes as on occasion you review the banana leaves and how they remain proper even in samba with the afternoon dressed in her breezes I haven't worn my coveting jacket for years but it still fits my intentions, a bit more snug in the right places you mention within casual when your calves whisper against their nudity and you move them around to keep me guessing how far above them you have hidden heaven perhaps closer to your heart than your thoughts but you said I will just love the neighborhood and the association fees are hardly a whisper _______________ daark |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Covet looks good on you. Do you think the association fees cover white-washing picket fences? /grin Love, the vase |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Made me smile at the vision I saw...well done...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Vase...the whitewash of ravishtown is more of a immersion process...saturation and all..special offers available too. ___ Ms. Star, thank you lady friend |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Once again I am impressed by the uniqueness and inimitability of your poetic skills. Thanks for the smiles! Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Mar, thank you lady friend |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Really intriguing, I love the lines in this they are just delicious. Well done poetic prince. as always Mushy x x x x x x x Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Marsha...thank you ms |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
and how they remain proper even in samba with the afternoon dressed in her breezes ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You make me swoon and sway me so good, DS~ Love your stuff!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Babyblue....you smile me with your tan candy whispers...thank you babe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
visual treat and alot left for readers imagination! fine writing, Daark! "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
James...thanks guy ___ Prasad, thanks amigo |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm pretty sure I've commented how wonderfully you whisper poems |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Sweetsun, thank you lady |
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