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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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She she is gone forever taking the sunlight. my prison now is wandering the soft darkness of these 'endless' hills alone with only the sharp-edged memories of her smile. ‘Love’ should not be so fragile, indeterminate, and as transient as the morning mists of Summer passing … into the Winter of the soul. --- b. e. adams (9/1/2012) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, but love is all that you say, Bruce, and even more. It gives you such a feeling of intense appreciation of the loved one it is hardly bearable. Unfortunately, as I have said, it is also all that you say. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Bruce, so often it is the most transient that is the most beautiful, the most breath-taking, the most precious, the most treasured . . . Owl |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
My heart hurts for you...I was sure you had found the woman of your soul...Your poem tells how deeply it feels...I agree love should not be so fragile...sending *BIG HUGS* with the hope they help a little... *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, but this love still inspires you beautifully, Bruce. As long as your memories are "sharp-edged", you keep it alive. Romantically gloomy. Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Some wonderful lines in this poignant and lovely poem, Bruce. Ida |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This......took my breath away. The beauty of your words is lovely, and yet it makes my heart ache and hurt so bad. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
She inspired this well written beauty Liz |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Achingly good write, the memories are with you still, but the ghost haunts your mind... Thanks for sharing. Goldenrose. music was my refuge.i could crawl into the spaces between the notes and curl my back to loneliness - Maya Angelou |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
as the morning mists of Summer passing … into the Winter of the soul. Super lines, fine writing!  "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks to all of you fine folks and v. talented writers who have been so kind with your comments along the way about my ever-most-humble 'scribblings.' I'm not sure I 'have it in me' to do any more ... I've become one of Mr. Eliot's 'hollow men' ... I hope all of you will write on though! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
‘Love’ should not be so fragile, indeterminate, and as transient as the morning mists of Summer passing … into the Winter of the soul. How very true... how beautifully written!!! |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
I really hope we see more of your talented words...with all the beauty in the universe and with your heart filled with it your visions should not die...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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