Open Poetry #48 |
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In The Swallow of Sleep (repost) |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere ![]() |
In the swallow of sleep from the belly of my dreams you appear wordlessly just out of reach beckoning me closer to taste your vision Dancing round my fire I can not escape the distance of its light and warmth to reach you I show you sultry seduction come on All but beg Come to me Come to me From your enticing position flipping a coin with a wink you take my face in your magic hands and ever so slowly kiss me awake in a sweat LGRĀ©2/16/11 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, indeed, a gem of a wakeup call. You are just a good poet. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I'm glad you think so...I've been reviewing a lot of my work and frankly I'm not impressed. I kinda liked this one though. Thanks for liking it too. Lori ![]() |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
What a wonderful way to wake up...well done...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Startime! Big Hugs back at you! Lori ![]() |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wooo! Very nice poetry!! Made me pucker-up... heeeheee. JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Ha JL! That's the spirit! Lori ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This beats an alarm clock any old time! LOL Enjoyed the wakening!! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
thanks girlfriend! Lori ![]() |
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