Open Poetry #48 |
The game |
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
So when the blood pumps up and down It’s like a see-saw deep within and this I play on all alone in the confines of my home. It’s the yes or no, the go or stay, the will or won’t, the do or don’t, that keeps the mind in constant play on the stage of mortal life. And then there are the clouds of course that drop their rain on my parade and in this drip, drop, splatter, splash, action sinks into the grave. Like mourners all the me, you, them, who play this game most every day! Helen / 19 August 2012 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Helen, and what a "game" it is! You touch upon the very mystery of existence ... What makes the motor go and what makes it stop? What is death? Just those little questions ... I believe we are not our body which perishes, we are ultimately a SOUL who is eternal and death is just the shedding of a body that serves no more. The soul lives without a body, but the body can't live without the soul. As always your words are thought provoking and so I expressed mine. Have a beautiful Sunday, dear Helen. Love your poetic ponderings. Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Those feeling you described so artfully, Helen, is the rising tides of life and without them we would surely go mad. We are driven by extremes, and even the muddling of everyday questions and decisions are beneficial to or mental health. This one go me to thinking, you are good at doing that. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your deep thoughts are always fascinating, Helen. Ida |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Ahhh the daily game of life...very well written...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you all so much for your comments. It's a game that can be quite exhausting sometimes but we play and we survive. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I agree...thought provoking and wonderfully worded |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Like mourners all the me, you, them, who play this game most every day!" Yep! Most learn at a very earl age: 'you wanna play? Get in the game!' Maybe it's best to be the odd one out... Enjoyed your expression: "The game" JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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