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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2012-08-18 01:45 PM

As essences would have it
and intricate synchronicity be
Existential tendrils twine
particles of time
into sentient breath
Butterfly effect
flits inevitable dice
Fate and faith
juxtapose
across minds
time begat
Between times
of dust to dust
countless paths crochet

LGR(C)8/18/12

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (08-20-2012 05:19 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-08-18 02:17 PM

quote:
Fate and faith
juxtapose
across minds
time begat
Between times
of dust to dust
endless paths crochet

I like all of these lines, with the last line sewing everything up nicely. Or in your case crocheting it up.

Ascentiant? Bigger than us? Something supreme? Just asking.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-08-18 03:21 PM

I love the vision of this poem...i feels good...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2012-08-18 04:00 PM

Well, I'm beginning to think I have the wrong word. The one I was looking for means (or so I thought)having awarness of self...like when Adam and Eve "realized" they were naked, making them different from the animals. I was trying to refer back to the time when homo sapiens became "people"

Help me out here if I'm wrong. Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2012-08-18 04:02 PM

Hey Startime! You big hugger you! Glad you got the picture. Thanks for your support.

Lori

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2012-08-19 06:27 AM

Dear Lori, I love your thought pattern here and you expressed your vision wonderfully. I think you meant to use the word "sentient" ... We are sentient beings and that is indeed an enormous step ahead along the path of our evolution.

Much enjoyed.

Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2012-08-19 09:01 PM

Bless you heart Margerhita! That's exactly what I was looking for. So glad you got my drift anyway.

Lori

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