Open Poetry #48 |
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Your Love |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! ![]() |
Your Love In this somber land of fading dreams and broken promises, beneath the cold- indifferent glare of random streetlamp suns along my darkling way, I was a hollow shadow walking this empty street of no return, until your love made me complete. --- b. e. adams (8/7/2012) |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
I am pleased her love has made you complete...beautifully written as always...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This poem has respectful love that is eternally everlasting and helps to renew faith in the power of love. Thank you for sharing. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Love it... Ms. E |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You are becoming a true master of romantic poetry, Bruce. Ida |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Enjoyed this, Bruce. Just wondering though whether it's another's love for us that makes us complete or our love for another. Perhaps I've got it backwards but when I truly loved then and only then did I feel complete. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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