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Open Poetry #48

Amelie In the Morning

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2012-07-20 08:00 PM

Amelie in the Morning

Here I am again
knocking on her door
desiring a little bit more
of what I got last night.

Her kisses a treat
succulent and sweet
her hugs swell as well
better than AmiBelle.

Finally she opens the door
and right before my eyes
Amelie has in her hands
her hot blueberry pie.

Oh la la the fresh aroma,
the mouth watering smell,
Amelie's fresh blueberry pie
is more delicious than AmiBelle's.

JamesLee
20July
2012

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2012-07-20 10:31 PM

Love It! Love the way you hooked us into it, led us to it.

j.

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2012-07-21 11:29 PM

I love it...the surprise ending is truely a treat...very well done...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2012-07-26 11:46 PM

Thank you jwesley and Startime for the wonderful responses...James

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