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Open Poetry #48

The Heron

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2012-07-12 10:23 PM

The Heron

from an endless past
coming and going
in the nebulous now
the Heron leaves no trace
and needs no guide
to a mutable future ___

quiet magnificence

--- b. e. a. (7/12/2012)

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2012-07-12 11:51 PM

I love Herons with their magnificent wing span as they glide on air currents...your words bring the vision to life...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Scooter
Member

since 2012-07-10

Posts 68

2 posted 2012-07-13 05:41 AM

Beautiful, graceful bird the heron. You did it well in this poem.

"The way to crush the bourgeoisie is to grind them between the millstones of taxation and inflation."-Vladimir Lenin

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2012-07-13 05:56 AM

I like this. I can just see the great heron as I read it.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2012-07-14 11:42 AM

You've captured the beaauty and grace of one of nature's precious gifts.
Ida

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

5 posted 2012-07-14 12:19 PM

The heron is magnificent!
Enjoyed your poem.
Ms. E

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