Open Poetry #48 |
Acceptance |
Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Acceptance Gossamer clouds sent the message Understanding fills heart and soul A dream a vision now vanished Yet the peace of forest remains Secret paths still lead to the well Hope lives forever eternal The music of the stars still twinkle From velvet sky of ebony Someday hearts will walk the same path Souls will reach out to each other While weaving magic of desire Wind will rejoice through the pine trees Fireflies will dance like fairies And the valley will receive two Who have searched the endless cosmos Understanding with acceptance Brings peace and balance from within And a gentle smile lights the face Karen Mc Neil July 12, 2012 *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
This is just beautiful, Karen. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Thank you, Jerry...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
The inevitable meeting of souls Michael |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Karen I love the beautiful positiveness of this write and yet it's elements of sad are still entwined in the threads of hope. The metaphors of nature are well expressed. Great work! Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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