Open Poetry #48 |
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Fear |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana ![]() |
![]() Uploaded with ImageShack.us the older I get the fewer truths I know one truth I know well, however is the face of fear sometimes we come across people with a face that has understood fear eyes hooded with all the dread in the world his words singing a song of incredulity his spirit sagging beneath the burden of deepest despair I have seen that face staring back through a mirror at me people . . . when we meet those who have climbed the mountain of fear sometime we just have to do things for them even if we're not sure it's the right thing to do but we do it for the sake of humanity we must reach out a helping hand or an ear to listen sometimes we must step into the darkness the step may lead nowhere but there are times when we must, absolutely must, take it ©July 9, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Oh yes my dear friend, you are giving a hand to one sinking in quicksand, you are a life line. Fear can be deadly. Lori ![]() |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes it can, Lori. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
WOW!!!I know that there is that face inside of me and slowly I am facing the fear but now I know that I must look in the mirror...Thank you so much...this poem has helped me in a way I cannot explain...I am greatful for your years of wisdom...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
JP, I can tell you have faced your fears and are now ready to show others the way out... you are very special my friend. Ms. E |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, Karen, in my case it took looking into the mirror to find the person I had really become to begin making him go away. Thank you for your observation. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Fear is not a pleasant thing to have to live with, besides being something that can harm you mentally, it can outright cause death, Ms. E. Thank you for your comments. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (07-11-2012 08:24 AM).] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I know what fear looks like, Jerry and you are right, It is not a pretty sight. Ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Good morning, Ida. Fear is a loathsome and evil sight. Thank you for weighing in on this subject. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes, it's true taking the step might be hard because of the fear of taking the step but it must be done. Excellent write. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hi, Eric, we're on the same page with this one. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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