Open Poetry #48 |
splinters in the grass |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
those times were hand me down handsome the playful times when water fountains had more love than just holding hands and we would race each other there to get the next drink, pretending to swallow so we had something the other wanted more and then a kiss would steal it from laughter and turns would be taken as if automatically excuses were hidden under hemlines and trees when innocent felt so naughty when broken so we left the pieces around the playground wondering who would notice their disarray and would they wonder why we broke them often ------------- daark |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
haha water fountains are full of awesome. who could resist that? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Nicole...they do have magic in them I understand...thanks ms |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this, DS... especially the first verse. *S* Thank you for whisking me back into magical times... before those splinters started drawing blood. *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Suthern...sometimes the healing after being pricked makes the itch something we look forward to. Thanks lady |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
a warm and loving write, loved the imagery daark Love is the life of the soul... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Tracie...thank you lady |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I wanna play too! Who can resist a good waterfall and shared kisses wrapped around laughter? Not me. ali-san |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
One has to either love your imagination or your rememberings, or both, or all. Or just the way you wind words. Yea, that's it. It's all in the wind. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Ali-San, thanks little one _____________ Sweetsun, thank you lady friend |
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