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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813
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we chewed words but it seems only I swallowed and swallowed and swallowed until the bitterness overfilled and back they spewed taken aback by the force with which they were expelled you avoided the stream by way of a quick exit * * * apologies in advance for the hue of this one |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You have nothing here to apologize for. Speaking truth from the heart is what poetry is all about. It's not always a pleasant purging, but certainly not something to condemn. Michael (Defender of the dark hue)  |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
What goes in must come out... Message, well said, Luminosity. Ms. E |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When you can purge the dark, pearls will follow...   |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
sigh, not much else in the way of words coming out of me today...but thank you |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
They sure came out with vision...*grin*...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Raw, one can only take so much...... Good strong spew. Glad you got that off your chest. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've taken the concept of having had all you can swallow to the next step - and done so with powerful emotions and vivid visuals! *S* I'm sorry they exited before reaping what they'd sown. Some harvests are well deserved. *G* (((HUGS))) |
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