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Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2012-06-27 09:31 PM

Day and Night Visions

First came Jerry with “Fall of the Sun”
and a photo that burned with beauty
with words that took us on secret trysts
where moonbeams brought his vision to life

Amaryllis with her “Firefly”
delighting with a magical light
brought to life with her gaudy brothers
in a vision that says “Here. I am.”

Helen shares her words of “Morning Break”
filled with a monument toheartbreak
and loves’ familiar loneliness
we shed tears as this vision unfolds

Eric sings us “Living in the Past”
singing of forgotten yesterdays
while taking us on a magic trip
where his visions brought forth sighs and smiles

Michael gives us “08-23-03”
a trip that shows us “brilliant sunrise”
bringing the best of nights’ fantasy
in a vision that makes the heart sigh

Day and Night Visions fill the spirit
uplifting with shared experience
taking us on personal vision
written from the hearts of great poets

Karen Mc Neil
June 27, 2012

*may our dreams ever be magical*
[This message has been edited by Startime1955 (06-27-2012 11:03 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-06-27 09:38 PM

Wonderful that you included me in this poem of such stalwarts, and thank you, Karen, for doing that.

Please. Please do not leave yourself out of this grouping, Karen, because your poems are the ones I mostly like to sit back and just shake my head at its magnificence.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2012-06-28 04:22 PM

I love it when poets inspire another poet... It's a double treat for the readers!!!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2012-06-28 05:16 PM

How absolutely lovely this is, dear Karen! It shows how you really enjoy the beautiful poetic offerings here on Pip and how deeply they inspire you.

You are a most precious presence here indeed.

Margherita

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2012-06-28 07:53 PM

Thanks for including me in this list.
I always appreciate your heart of kindness and compassion.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

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