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Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

0 posted 2012-06-27 01:11 AM

.

You little cliche, you
chemical hope on wings-
hung in the ripening hayfield
gaudy with your brothers

in the old search. No one wants
to be alone. And when caught
like moonlight in my palms, your
neon sonnet

never stops. 'Here' you tell me.
Tell my hands, the night-
'Here I am. Come
find me. Here. I am.'

.
.

[This message has been edited by Amaryllis (06-27-2012 01:52 AM).]

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

1 posted 2012-06-27 01:49 AM

If a firefly could speak this is exactly what
I'd imagine it would say.
Smiles, ms. e

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

2 posted 2012-06-27 01:57 AM

Thanks Ms e!!

Best,
A

Startime1955
Senior Member

since 2012-04-22

Posts 1072
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2012-06-27 08:54 AM

I love fireflies...this poem is a wonderful vision of them...*BIG HUGS*

*may our dreams ever be magical*

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

4 posted 2012-06-27 09:41 AM

Fine writing.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

luminosity
Senior Member

since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

5 posted 2012-06-27 09:50 AM

yes I love the way you write, this is perfect!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-06-27 03:17 PM

Delightful poetry. I can just picture that firefly grinning up at you while in your hand.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2012-06-27 08:05 PM

One of nature's beautiful mysteries.
I love this and how you've captured what so many of us have done.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2012-06-28 04:22 PM

quote:
And when caught
like moonlight in my palms, your
neon sonnet

never stops.

OMG (first time I use this

) This is beyond beautiful, it makes me shed tears of emotion ... for even the tiny light of a firefly is a perfect reflection of the "I AM".

Overwhelmingly wondrous.

Love,
Margherita

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

9 posted 2012-06-28 11:32 PM

Many many thank-you's to all who've stopped by...thanks for reading & commenting my little firefly.. !

And Margherita, yes...you ' got it', so much.... hugs!

Best,
Amaryllis

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

10 posted 2012-06-29 01:24 PM

simple brilliance and soft but torrential soul-truths. I seriously need to check out more of your heartspeak. Wonderful.

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