Open Poetry #48 |
Wishing |
Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Wishing Wishing twilights darkness would embrace my spirit lifting me into velvet night drifting on warm currents over distance where eternal souls will gather sharing the same vision in star – field sky Wishing Karen Mc Neil June 22, 2012 *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
This is so weird, Karen, I just finished writing Chapter 37 of my novel, The Late Great God, and it had as its subject spirits. Anyway, just thought I would share that with you. I loved this poem, a little different than your usual offering, but the change was gratifying. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
LOL...seems like we are on the same wave length...this poem type is called rictameter...I was just playing with words and decided to try it...I am not sure if I got it right or not but it fit my mood...thanks for commenting...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
You have a way of taking the reader with you, Karen, in this out-of-body journey. I especially like the warm feeling in the drift, like a summer's night that brushes the senses and all feels right under the stars. I've not read your work before last night. My name is Karen, too. I visit every now and then. |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Thank you for the visit, Karen...I love to combine nature and love...I am glad you enjoyed it...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Reminds me of laying on my back in my youth staring up into the star-filled sky and watching the lighting bugs, fire flies, go by...her beside me, us, holding hands... Nice... j. |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
J...mmmwhat a beautiful image you have given me with your reply...thank you...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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